Final Presentation

Notes

I'll introduce what is plagiariam,why plagiarism is wrong and what will happen if you plagiarize.I'll use some humor and metion "PowerPoint is evil".I'll take apart the word of "plagiarism",and explain it in a funny way,and then give a professional explaination.I'll also give some example and maybe make fun of my classmates.

Article report of "GIRL"

In this article,there are some suggests written by a mother.She ask his daughter to be a gentlewoman,to be a girl, not to be a slut.She tell her daughter some information about how to live,how to deal with clothes,foods and area she live,how to protect herself.The article is full of mother’s love and hope.She want her daughter to have a better future.This article is kind of strange.There is no intact sentence, no story,no daily life.The whole article is just made up of many imperative sentences.I think this article isn't a piece of function,and I don't know what kind of this article.And I don't know why the writer write this article,just give her daughter some suggests?

vocabulary

heap = put many same thing together

barehead = don’t wear hat

hem = edge

crease = fold something (maybe the paper),and them we will get a line

harbor(verb) = protect

slut = very bad female

khaki = color between yellow and brown

bully/bullied = some strong people attack and tease weak people

plagiarism

1.Plagiarism is two children who have different parents.

(1)They have similar looks.

(2)They have similar character.

(3)They have similar DNA.

2.Plagiarism=play jaguar=play with jaguar

(1)You may be attacked

(2)You may be killed

(3)Your head may be played by the jaguar as a ball

3.plagiarism=play jerk=play a role as a jerk

(1)You may do something ridiculous like stammer

(2)You may do something silly like relieving yourself everywhere

(3)You may kill yourself by dropping yourself out of the window

I review Mercer’s blog.

1.I review Mercer’s blog.

2. 9 The article written by Mercer engage the material.

3. 8 Mercer did a good job.But I think what Mercer thought is different from mine.I think Lisa 

and David are really different people,so they never repeat each other.

4. 10 Yes,there is no Chinese.

5. 7 Mercer’s English is OK,but is not too great.There are some grammar mistakes.For example,in 

this sentence,“I see some emotion hide in the words.”I think “hide” should be changed into “hidden”,and 

 “in”should be changed into “under”.

6. 8 No,I think it doesn’t matter if writer’s name is not display.But because his name is not 

display,I can’t give him 10 points.

7. 5 I’m so sad to see that Mercer hasn’t designed his blog.And there is no good title and labels 

in his blog.But it’s really easy to use his blog,it is the most important.And I’m so sad to say I 

don’t have good title,neither. :-(

8. 8 Mercer take the stance of David,I think.And he may have simply told us what the material is,

I’m not really sure.He didn’t make a claim,but it’s OK for him to tell us the material already. 

9. 10 Yes,everyone can comment.

10. 3 I must say no.Mercer hasn’t designed his blog.

 Total points: 78/100

Final Comments:What Mercer think is great,and it engage the material.But I think Mercer should 

spend time designing his blog.There are also some grammar mistakes that should be improved.

#5

Ailment--the illness that is not very serious
Sear/seared--the things that is dry by the fire,sun and so on
Errand--task
Errant--don`t go on a right way

eerie /Eerily--strange/frightening

confine/confining--limit

quintessential--something that is perfect

pans/pan (verb)--the way to find gold

 

 

In this part of the article,the writer and his sister went to watch a movie.But they arrived in a wrong theater and watched a movie which showed a older sister and a younger errant brother.And that boy is just like Lisa,so Lisa impressed a lot.They even saw the similiar people in the real life.Lisa felt very sorry for what she had done  in the past,so she want others to forgive her.

I like watching movies and often get some emotional resonance from the movies.I may think if the story can take place in the life and if I have experienced the story when I watch a movie.Just like the movie "So Young",it introduce the life of some collegers,the love,the friendship and so on.The people change a lot with the time go by,but some of feeling will never change. This story is so real that I often thought about myself.Some people,like me may wonder if I will suffer it?What should I do at that time?Will…? Some others who had experienced it were moved and remember the day they get along with there classmates.